How the World was Made 1

Over the next few months I've decided to post the prose-poems from the manuscript 

How the World was Made

Flight to Venus/Mark Flowers

Even though most of the poems have been published in print or in online journals, I simply can't get the whole thing published.

I now have five unpublished manuscripts that talk to me late at night, wondering when they’ll see the light of day (It might be interesting to go into an analysis of the labyrinthine world of publishing here, but I'll save that for another day).

I suppose it's time to start my own press. Why wait for someone else's nod of approval? It's a time-honored tradition in poetry. Although it requires some initial cash...

How the World was Made
was written between 2009 and 2016. The words and stories in the book absorbed those years - and the years beyond. Poetry is news that stays news.

Without further ado, here are the first three prose poems.

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Mining

I have been traveling into the earth since before my great-grandfather was born. It is something I do consciously, connecting back to the dead. I am not saying this from inside a dream. I have an alarm clock next to the bed.

I can hear the tunnels beneath the floor. Each tunnel has a different word that it repeats, has been repeating since before my great-grandfather went down into the earth. I follow each word down until it blends into another word. “Sell” dissolves into “Sin.” “Sin” dissolves into “Salute.”  There are men still cutting tunnels down there, so the permutations are endless. I am not saying this from inside a dream. I have a knife next to the bed.

I’ve seen my great-grandfather down there. I’ve seen yours. He has quick scavenging eyes, albino skin slick as a cave fish. His claws reach out, tear at the earth. His nails are sharp, long.  He doesn’t need a pick-axe or shovel; he doesn’t need a light. He has become a perfect digging machine. He lifts dirt to his mouth, chews, swallows. I am not saying this from inside a dream. I have a pair of gloves next to the bed. 

Our ancestors keep eating. I hear them chewing and swallowing. They do not know how to stop.  They will replace the earth. I am not saying this from inside a dream. I have a book of matches and a gallon of gas. I will follow the word “fire” down until it dissolves into “fish”.

(Previously published in Hanging Loose Magazine and in a 2River chapbook in the US; and previously published in Planet: The Welsh Internationalist in the UK)

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My Mother’s Body

When the war was over, she danced. Everyone danced, touched each other, bodies so close, but it was innocent, wrapped in victory. She wanted to dance this victory dance for the rest of her life; to be so close to so many, to be touched, but no one touching her in that way...

Her body is the keeper of all secrets; thinner and thinner, disappearing inside her clothes, trying to become wind. Leaves fly. Walnuts slam against the porch. Winter is almost here. Her body believes in national security, keeping the things that should not be said from being said, keeping the things that should not be felt from being felt, keeping the things that should not be remembered from being remembered.

Night after night, when I look in the mirror I see her drunk father stumble into the house, stare through her, leaving the front door open, snow blowing across the floorboards. I see her mother stare out the kitchen window, transparent, silent, and thin, so thin. Is this true? 

Encrypted messages pass back and forth between satellites that shoot across the night sky, never touching the ground. I cannot look away from my face, down at the rest of my body. I know parts of my body are disappearing, too, and I don’t know how to bring anything back.

Holes. Sacrifice. Everyone must do their part.

(Previously published in Hanging Loose Magazine in the US; and in Planet: The Welsh Internationalist in the UK)


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March in Denver

Clear sky. The sun is a furious bird. Coal trains move through the mountains to the west. So many brilliant cars pass the anti-war signs speared into grass. When a car honks in support, a friend screams “Park your car!” He has only a few seconds to explain all of history.

The governor is up in the mountains, fishing. He casts his line. Concentric circles ripple through a jet trail. The sun opens its beak, a tongue of flame flickers. We march down Market Street. A couple of elementary school kids raise their fists and shout “Fuck the War!” A few teens holding shopping bags stare at us, confused. One raises a middle finger. 

The sun flies from the mouth of a drunk vet: “I’ve been to war! What do you know about war?” I want to tell him the sun is a bird lover, a steel girder, a Hollywood movie starring the first atomic bomb; that it never stops burning eyes into the open face of water; that it never stops churning language back into blood for all of us to drink; that it eats time (that strange soft tissue); that only water throws it into relief. 

We shout in front of the Halliburton high-rise: “War profiteers!” It’s Saturday, so of course no one’s inside. The sun ignites the back of a trout up in the mountains. The governor reels the fish in, laughing. A protestor with the face of a clown smears red paint across Halliburton’s glass doors. Suddenly, everyone is smearing red paint across the glass. The lone security guard rushes off to call his superiors. We run, laughing. We have stopped nothing.

(Previously published in Serving House Journal)

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A poem by Mark Pawlak: Among the Colleagues

Voila, another installment of Poetry? I just don’t get it. A series where I post a poem or group of poems by one author, followed by anything the author wants to say about the work. Today’s poem is by Mark Pawlak.

Mark is the author of six poetry collections, including Official Versions, Buffalo Sequence, and Special Handling: Newspaper Poems. His work has been included in Best American Poetry (2006), and he is also one of the editors of one of the longest running literary magazines and small presses on earth – Hanging Loose Magazine and Hanging Loose Press.

Here’s my first encounter with reading Mark’s work: 2006, I’m sitting in the cafeteria in the hospital where I work, eating some grim sandwich, feeling hopeless - about my job, about the horrors happening every second across the planet (especially because many of those horrors were perpetrated by my own government) - and I began to read Official Versions. Halfway through the book, there was catharsis. Relief. A purging. Someone was actually addressing the double-speak and lies that we all endure (and accept) on a daily basis. And, even better, it sometimes made me laugh!

There is also in his work a fascination for detail. A couple years ago I bought Go to the Pine: Quoddy Journals 2005-2010. I have a fondness for books of poems where each poem can only be truly understood in relation to the whole. These are poems/journal entries related in sequence to the others - and the detail is absolutely gorgeous, evocative. The title is taken from haiku master Basho’s advice to his students: ‘If you want to write about the pine, go to the pine.’

Below is Mark’s poem “Among the Colleagues”, followed by his explanation. (In the explanation he manages to get in another poem. Nice! I admire that.)

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Among the Colleagues

Before descending into the subway’s maw,

before facing the mess on my desk:

Shop grates drawn, sleepers stretched out on benches,

in doorways, just beginning to stir,

but already someone with a broom has gathered

fallen buds into neat piles on the square’s red bricks:

heaps of fairy goblets on long green stems

left over from  yesterday’s celebration—

Morris dancers in knickers,

jangling ankle bells, clacking sticks.

Already this early, at his coffee shop station,

the self-appointed doorman:

straggly hair, beard, gray, flecked with white;

paper cup in one  hand:

patrons drop in their coins, no  words exchanged;

his vest and trench coat, bulging with rolled newspapers,

slips of paper crumpled in shirt pocket— is he,

bum, bard, or bodhisattva?

Yesterday: I saw red-eyed Sappho, stumble along the sidewalk

oblivious to the crush— office workers headed home—,

her gaze downcast, mumbling verses as she passed shops

with pansies in window boxes and recessed doorways:

from their shadows satyrs and sirens, her familiars,

leaned forward, greeted her.  This morning,

leather-skinned Li Po, staggers past, scattering pigeons,

ending a night filled no doubt with wine and song.

Strands of hair peeking from under knit cap,

he lurches from this lamp post to the next,

embraces one as a long lost friend,

spits curses—“Motherfucker,”—at another

as at a sworn enemy, “Motherfucker.”

Early “patrons” at tables of the not-yet-open outdoor café, my confrères:

ruddy-faced men in hand-me-down work boots,

coats half-buttoned, sweatshirts showing beneath:

White-bearded Walt Whitman shares a cigarette

with someone who could be his twin.

Nearby, Basho, tonsured, in need of a shave,

scans yesterday’s headlines,

at his feet, two plastic bags stuffed with only he knows what.

And, just back from the west, Po Chü-i

sits under a shade tree in new leaf,

his one crutch propped against the trunk,

scribbling poems on scraps of paper,

which he neatly folds, sticks into his pocket.

Finally, here is portly Marx!

parked beside cardboard boxes of books in a shopping cart, his movable library,

signature beard splayed on chest,

eyes fixed on a book propped open on his belly,

deep in conversation with himself—something just audible

about “oil prices . . .  simpler times . . . bosses . . . ;”

one moment serious, holding up both sides of the argument,

the next chuckling to himself, amused.

Before descending into the subway’s maw,

before facing the mess on my desk,

such, these May mornings, such is the company I keep.

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 Parataxis

The physical act of writing and the implements used can influence what you produce. Think William Carlos Williams' early modernist poems, written on prescription pads while he was making house calls in his car: short with short lines. Even longer poems, such as "January Morning Suite," are made of linked fragments that he jotted down in passing. Think Kerouac's On the Road stream of consciousness rush typed on a continuous scroll of newsprint. Contrast that with his haiku and sketches, jotted down in little pocket notebooks while he walking the streets of San Francisco. Robert Creeley once said that "...the qualification of the size of the paper… will often have an effect on what you're writing, or whether or not you're using pencil or pen.  Habits of this kind," he noted, "are almost always considered immaterial or secondary. And yet, for my own reality, there is obviously a great connection between what I physically do as a writer in this sense, and what comes then out of it." (Vancouver Poetry Conference, 1963)

What I physically do is steal moments from my job to make notes for poems in either a 4 in. x 6 in. Mt. Tom or in a pocket Moleskin notebook that I always carry. Each workday morning I travel by bus from my home to Harvard Square; there I stop at one of several cafe's to sip an espresso, before descending the escalator to the Red Line subway that transports me across the Charles River and Boston to the UMass harbor campus where I work a 9-5 administrative job. Pausing in the early morning when my mind is uncluttered, I take in the sights and sounds and record them in my notebook. It's usually the hour when the homeless are just waking and beginning to move about, the hour when shopkeepers are arriving, unlocking their storefront grates. I also take note of people and things observed while riding the subway: flaneuries.

Fragments juxtaposed is the modus operandi for most of the poems in my forthcoming collection, In Transit. Meaning constructed by parataxis.  The length of  "Among the Colleagues” is not typical of the rest, but the observed fragments include in it derive from the same practice of notebook jottings: the Morris Dancers that perform in Holyoke Square each year on May Day, the tiny, fluted green stamen that litter the pavement after the trees have leafed-out; the ancient panhandler stationed outside the door of the coffee shop I frequent, the homeless drunk I see stumbling down an alleyway most mornings, etc. Most of the other poems in the forthcoming collection are snapshots of things observed, conversations overheard, written literally while I’m in transit between home and work, work and home.

           

These poems—I call them poetic journals—are in a tradition of observational poetics that originates in Williams' dictum "No ideas but in things;" and was elaborated in the Objectivists practice of "thinking with things as they exist." George Oppen, Charles Reznikoff, Lorine Niedecker, and to a lesser extent Louis Zukovsky are my models. It's a tradition that was taken up and further elaborated by many poets among the post-WW II generation. In Transit pays homage to city poets like Harvey Shapiro, who wrote in his poem tribute to Reznikoff, "I put these [observations] down in my ledger,/Charles, walking and watching,/which is the way we serve.” My poetic journals have an affinity with the “I do this, I do that” poetics of Frank O’Hara, too—although  my approach would more be accurately described as “I saw this, I heard that.”

           

Reznikoff, who daily walked the streets of Manhattan, and who made exquisite haiku-like poems out of the things he observed and recorded, offered this prescription: "the poet presents the Thing in order to convey the Feeling. He should be Precise about the thing, and Reticent about the feeling." I try in my poems to follow this dictum. In most of my journal poems the "I" is inferred rather than explicit, discernible only from the poem's point-of-view. "Among the Colleagues" is also atypical in this regard. More characteristic of the entire collection are the linked fragments of "Four/Square" below.

4/ Square

           

1.

Slant early morning light

on empty city square,

empty but for pigeons,

inspecting paving stones

for flawed workmanship

under the watchful,

half-opened eye

of the woman

who sleeps in an alcove,

rat’s nest of hair for her pillow.

2.

Outside the coffee shop, a man is changing out of bedclothes, as if in the privacy of his own dressing room, his wardrobe spread out on two benches and a chair. He pulls tee-shirt on over Union Suit, then hooded sweatshirt over that, followed by a sweater, then another, then a checkered wool shirt on top that he meticulously buttons all the way up, oblivious all the while to pedestrians hurrying toward the T stop, shopkeepers turning keys in locks, storefront grates noisily going up behind him.

3.

Man hunched over

outdoor café table,

muy scruffy,

but not scrofulous,

wearing a straw hat

frayed at the brim,

sits nibbling

breakfast pastry

while perusing his newspaper

that’s folded neatly beside:

CHESS LESSONS $2

Nervous sparrows at his feet

peer upward,

awaiting crumbs

to drop from his beard—

the Master and his Disciples.

  

4.

7:10 AM

Three ruddy-faced, boon companions, two men and a woman, sit together on a bench, outside the coffee shop, beside improvised cardboard bedcovers, conversing while rubbing sleep from their eyes. (One asks me for the time as if he had an appointment to keep.) They exchange greetings with the cop nearby on hard-hat duty where new paving is being laid; then offer comments on the passersby hurrying to work or subway, men and women in suits, in pressed shirts and slacks or blouses and skirts, most with cell phones raised to ears. Roving gangs of sparrows scavenging for muffin crumbs hop excitedly on grass patches bordering the path that cuts diagonally through. (One, at my feet, cocks its chestnut head, begging a handout.) Their shrill cheeping is drowned by the rumble and thrum of delivery trucks shifting gears, accelerating, one of which has three foot high green lettering stenciled on its side:

TROPICANA

PURE PREMIUM

Not from concentrate

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Where Mark can be found online: 

Interview with Cervena Barva Press

Interview with Breakwater Review (with co-editor of Hanging Loose Press Dick Lourie)

 From 'Glover Circle Notebooks'
 (about Denise Levertov)

Present/Tense: Poets in the World (an anthology of political poetry edited by Mark)

Sections from Go to the Pine online (Shampoo Magazine)