Showing posts with label Dystopian Novel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Dystopian Novel. Show all posts

Sunday, January 19, 2014

Among The Angels' Hierarchies: The Movie (Part III)


A Question for the Damned

“So…what’s your novel about?”


It’s a legitimate question. But it can cause even the most confident of writers to run screaming down the hall, lock themselves in the bathroom, and spend the night sobbing, curled next to the toilet. Imagine spending years putting together a somewhat layered and complex story only to find that the world needs - nay...MUST HAVE - a condensed, easily digestible summary, in order to open the book.

 “Yes, yes, all that’s a given – so what’s the novel about?”

There are times when I’m somewhat autistic when it comes to small talk, and during those times, I immediately interpret the question in terms of theme: “It’s about illusion.”  “It’s about Fate.” Invariably, I’ll get the glazed look, the confused nod, then a quick exit from the conversation: “Oh, fate…yes…you want another beer …”

“Okay, what I’m really asking is this: What happens in the book? What’s the plot?”

Oh right, I understand now. Another legitimate question, surely. When you pull a book off the shelf at a bookstore (remember those?), or while scanning for books online, you want to know what the book is about, yes? I do.

Cool Cover: Family Cannon/Halina Duraj

First, like everyone else, I judge a book by its cover (“Ooh, cool image!”), then I turn it over and read the blurb on the back to see what it’s about. Now, you and I both know that the blurb is not telling us what the book is really about – it’s an advertisement, meant to get you hooked enough to dig into your miserly pockets and pull out fifteen bucks, just for the privilege of reading on:

"Running away from a dark past, Ishmael ships out on a whaling vessel to the South Seas. Just when he thinks his troubles are at an end…that's when his true nightmare begins. Is the captain taking the ship on a one-way collision course into HELL? What hideous white beast has been lurking beneath the waves, waiting for this very ship, this very captain, this very crew?  A cliff-hanging, edge of your seat, white-knuckle inducing, cosmic battle between good and evil awaits...." 

                             Call me Ishmael. Call me a cab.


“Unh-hunh. The question still remains – what’s the book about?”


The World of Among the Angels’ Hierarchies

Angels' takes place in a dystopian near-future. The majority of the population in the western United States has been forcibly evacuated east of the Missouri River due to prolonged drought. The wealthy live on protected compounds, while the poor scrabble for a living as best they can. 


The preoccupation in both compound and non-compound life is with virtual games. (Yes, yes, I know this is a clichéd trope – but in this case there is high level of satire involved. To play a game you put your face into a blue halo - called a Nimbus - projected off any available screen. The Nimbus enshrouds and triggers parts of the brain, giving the player the sensation that they are actually a character in the game – thinking what they think, feeling what they feel. But there is no winning or losing, you are just along for the ride. All choices have already been made....a bit like participating in our economy, many parts of our political system, and the entertainment/spectacle culture. The only choice is usually which 'character' to be.)


The corporations (in reality, just one, under different 'imprints') control all media technology and are almost exclusively engaged in broadcasting spectacles of fake natural disasters: giant sand plumes in the Sahara; mutant cranes as harbingers of a Christian apocalypse (known as crane-gels); plague pyres in China. Games are released to accompany each spectacle (For example, images of plague pyres are synched with a game called Voyages, in which the player participates in a ghost dance until they leave their body and travel the globe, visiting shamans and healers in search of a plague cure). 

Meanwhile Deth, a drug that simulates a near-death experience, ravages the country. Deth-heads hear angelic voices compelling them to carve words into their skin. The drug is fatally addictive.


Oh, for the Love of God, Christien, What the F@#$ is Angels' About?

Okay, fine. Here's a short synopsis-type-thingie:

Angels' is the story of Caleb Mission, recently returned to Christmas City, his hometown in northwest Iowa, after an abortive search for his cousin and childhood mentor, Christine, an artist and apprentice shaman/healer, who mysteriously disappeared in Colorado ten years before. 

The novel tracks his first month back in town, including dangerous run-ins with the local Deth-house leader (called an Azrael); encounters with mutant cranes, said to be apocalyptic angels; misadventures procuring euthanasia drugs for a possible immortal in an old folk’s home; and building a tentative relationship with his Aunt Therese, the local healer, who he blames for Christine’s disappearance. 

Interwoven with the present-day action are chapters tracing Caleb’s past in the megalopolis of Des Moines (food riots, anarchist collective shenanigans, marriage and divorce) and Christine’s journey from Iowa up to her disappearance in Colorado.

Throughout , the three main characters – Caleb, Christine and Therese – struggle with and against their understanding of fate and free will and what these things even mean when seen in the context of vast, cyclical patterns of the natural world.  

All threads are eventually tied together when a local territory dispute between Deth-houses erupts into all-out war. 


                          Greek Fate.




                    





                                                                                                       Taoist Wu-Wei


 



You know,the usual stuff.






Among the Angels' Hierarchies: The First Chapter

New Moon

New moon is blindness.  The bat jerks, insect to insect – mouse-bodied, monster-faced – a black thread through the holes of night. 

My eyes are stones.  They slip from their sockets, sink through the surface of the earth; through the faces of those not yet born, clinging to the underbelly of a white grub; through the brittle lime-crust of the still-aching dead; through harsh tunnels of anthracite that beckon like the claws of the lonely; through the underground veins of water, warm as blood, that dissolve thirst, dissolve hunger, dissolve cloth, dissolve the soft electrical thoughts that shoot between the phantom calcium carbonate skeletons of horn coral fossils...   

A black dog stops at the edge of a field, turns, listens.  Dawn is coming.  Do not be afraid.  


*



Silence the length of Highway 6.  No wind, no crickets.  Caleb Mission wiped sweat from his eyes.  Ten yards ahead, a half-burnt deer carcass stretched across the road’s shoulder; five empty beer bottles propped against the torn belly, one stuffed into the deer’s black mouth. 
            The stench was unbearable, eye-watering. 
            He lifted the back of his hand to his nose, looked across the fields south of the highway:  burdock, ragweed, Canadian thistle, horseweed.  A grove of trees a quarter mile off marked where a farm house used to stand.  Beyond the grove, a silo rose from a patch of scrub sumac, listing slightly, wrapped in grape-vine and clutchweed.  When he was a child all these fields had been Renascorn; a pharm-strain grown by Renascorp.  Their motto: a renaissance in corn.  
            He scanned the dark blue thunderheads flashing on the western horizon.  Somewhere out there, across ten miles of abandoned weed fields, the storm was drenching the long-abandoned town of Jasper in cool sheets of rain.  But here – no wind, no scent of rain, nothing.
            What was he doing out here?  Back in Christmas City for only one day and he was already walking away?
            There was a shiver of grass, leaves.  Caleb squinted east down the highway.  Twenty yards beyond the deer, a black mongrel appeared through a curtain of wild carrot.  The dog crossed the road, angled toward the carcass.  Ignoring Caleb, it sniffed a leg bone, then took a black hoof into its mouth and pulled, tearing the rotten haunch away from the body.  One of the bottles propped against the deer’s stomach fell, rolled a few inches, stopped. 
            Flies scattered, settled.   
            Caleb spotted a fist-sized slab of broken macadam on the road’s shoulder, slowly bent down, and picked it up.  The dog dropped the deer leg and took a step towards him, growling low, baring yellow teeth. 
            Rock in hand, Caleb waited for the dog to make the next move.  Waves of heat rose off the black road.  Sweat trickled down his temples, hung off his chin. 
            The rattle of an engine, coming from the west, drove the dog into a patch of burdock next to the deer.  Caleb turned.  A black Dodge pickup was heading towards him, riding the center line.
            As the pickup passed, Mike Shiner, shirtless, handprints the color of dried blood across his naked chest, leaned out the passenger window and tossed a beer bottle over Caleb’s head.  An arc of yellow liquid trailed behind the bottle, raining down onto Caleb’s head and shoulders, into the ditch grass.  The truck squealed to a stop next to the deer. 
            Caleb sniffed his t-shirt.  Piss.
            Three women, naked to the waist, sat in the bed of the pickup.  Their emaciated shoulders, breasts and torsos were streaked with dried blood from the gibberish words they’d cut into each other’s skin.  They giggled, still high on their run, seeing angels everywhere, in everything. 
            Deth-girls. 
            Danny Shiner leaned out the driver’s window, nodded at the deer.  “You see the present we left you?”
            Caleb waited. 
            “There’s more there than meets the eye,” Danny continued, “but you gotta look real close.  It’s our way of saying ‘welcome back.’”
            One of the girls stood up, raised her face and arms to the sun and erupted into a long Deth-shriek.  The two sitting on either side of her opened their mouths in unison and let fly shrieks of their own.    
            It was all Caleb could do to keep from covering his ears to block out the terrible sound.  The scream echoed around him, inside him.  He took a deep breath and slowly lifted his hand, gave Danny the finger. 
            “C’mon, Mission, I expect more from you,” Danny said.  Mike laughed. 
            The girl dropped her arms, looked at Caleb; smiling, ecstatic.  Her face had the caved-in look of a long time user, as if the skull behind the skin had shrunk, leaving the face prematurely wrinkled. 
            She was already dead.  
            “I think Kalia here likes you,” Danny said. “And I would have offered her to you...but now…”  He pointed at Caleb’s upraised finger.  More laughter from inside the truck. 
            Danny slid back into the cab, punched the brake and accelerator at the same time.  The rear tires screamed against the blacktop and all three girls shrieked back, echoing the tires.  The truck fishtailed, shot east, pitching the Deth-girls forward onto their hands and knees.  
            More shrieks, laughter. 
            Caleb held his finger aloft until the truck was out of sight and he was, once again, enveloped in silence.  He scanned the burdock for signs of the dog.  Runnels of sweat trickled down the back of his neck, along his spine, down his arms, dripped off his fingers.        
            Water.  He needed water.  Maybe the storm would reach him on his way back to Christmas City. 
            The clouds were so dark.  A promise of cold rain. 
  
 


Next week, a new series: Poetry? I Just Don't Get It.

One poem with commentary by the author

First up in the series:
"If I Ring My Body Like A Bell of Coins..." 
by Michaela Kahn 


 

Sunday, January 12, 2014

Among the Angels' Hierarchies: The Novel (Part II)



1. Seeds of the Novel: Apocalypse Where? ...and Garbage

                           "Science fiction is not predictive; it is descriptive."

                                                            Ursula LeGuin
                                                            Introduction to The Left Hand of Darkness  

Looking back, I can see that the first seed of the novel was listening to a panel discussion called something like “writing the apocalypse in a time of apocalypse” at Wiscon (the world’s leading feminist science-fiction convention), back in 2004. I don’t remember specifics from the discussion (we’d been driving all day and I was pretty tired), but the question stuck with me.

How go about writing the apocalypse in these apocalyptic times?  

When I scan the news, I find that, for the most part, it’s mostly a technological, biological, and political freak show. Think about it: The US Congress is being held captive by men and women who believe that a white-bearded god created the earth about 6000 years ago; meanwhile, they lavishly fund projects like DARPA’s surveillance insects, created from the science they repudiate. Then there’s the horror of Transgenic Pigs and Web-Spinning Goats; Robot Jellyfish powered by a rat’s heart cells; Smart Billboards; “safe” memory erasure, and, of course, the great and powerful NSA data-suck programs, to name only a very few of the ‘sci-fi’ things currently out there.

How keep up? And is that even the point?

The best speculative fiction (Sci-fi, Fantasy, both together, and with various blends of other genres) is about what’s happening right now. As Ursula Le Guin once said: “Science fiction is not predictive; it is descriptive.” Speculative fiction is a way of talking about THIS world, the one we’re living in right now. And I would say that because the world right now is so amazingly, tragically, and horrifically weird, speculative fiction may be one of the most useful ways of approaching it, of trying to make sense of it.




The second seed happened while driving home from work in the spring or summer of 2006, listening to the local public radio station. At that time, I was working at St. Vincent’s hospital in Santa Fe, in the medical records department. 
 
(Working in medical records was a bit like living inside a Kafka novel – The Trial or The Castle – but instead of being the desperate protagonist trying to find a way into or out of the labyrinth, I was one of the faceless bureaucrats working deep in the bowels of the system. I would like to believe that I did not act like a faceless bureaucrat, but the health care system is a vast, clanking, somewhat chaotic machine, dominated by insurance and pharmaceutical companies, and once you enter its domain as a worker-drone, it’s hard not to become assimilated...). 

 On that particular afternoon, the talk-show host was interviewing a journalist promoting a book about garbage (I’m pretty sure it was Heather Rogers’ Gone Tomorrow: The Hidden Life of Garbage; but it may have been Elizabeth Roylte’s Garbage Land…I can’t be certain.). During the interview, the host kept trying to get her to talk about what individuals can do to cut down on waste. It seemed that he was coming from the point of view that all the troubles of the world could be solved if each and every individual, on their own – but still participating in the economy – simply recycled. 

The problem with that belief is that it assents to the economy as it is: We can continue with the kinds of jobs, the kinds of corporations, the kinds of business practices that we currently have – we just need to throw in a little more green energy and social justice and everything will work out fine and dandy.

Ah, but you can’t run the economy – as it exists now – off green energy alone. It’s not going to happen. It is a child’s dream. It’s possible (some day) to have a more just, equitable and green economy (yes, I’m one of those dreamers…and I’m not the only one…), but it will not look like the one we have now. In fact, it will look different in different locales, bioregions, and cultures. And it will require that the Western world live a bit closer to the earth (I mean this literally...and in all senses). 


You can’t have limitless growth in a finite world. This is another child-like dream. Huge corporations, especially energy corporations, already understand this. That’s why they are making a violent and desperate grab for the last of the world’s resources (coal, oil, natural gas, arable land, water...). 



My memory is that the author of the book on garbage argued with the interviewer, saying that the corporate world (and the economy they control) was the major perpetrator of waste. Corporations, and those who benefit from the wealth they generate, are dependent on waste. Planned obsolescence is built into the system. Still, the interviewer doggedly insisted that we were all responsible, and that if we all did our part then surely something in the world would change.

What is wrong with this guy, I thought. Why is he unable to grasp what the author is saying – that the problem is systemic? That the problem is the result of the economic system itself? Half way home, it occurred to me that, just like those who deny climate change, his mind had faltered in the face of such a huge problem. He had stared into a terrible abyss and his mind had shut down. The only thing he could do was fall back on old ideas, spouting some of that good ole American optimism


I was reminded of those Micky Rooney/Judy Garland movies from the late 30’s, where the solution to all problems was to put on a show. Usually in someone’s barn. 


Sing! 



Dance! 



Problem solved!




This happens not just when we are confronted by the effects of the economic system on which we rely, but also when we are confronted by the gargantuan dismantling of our constitutional rights by the corporate influenced executive, legislative and judicial branches of the government; or by the forests, animals, and plants disappearing at a rate too vast for the human brain to process. When I look at the photos of the shrinking polar ice cap (almost nonexistent in summer) or see the videos of the giant ice shelves in Antarctica or Greenland falling into the sea, my mind wants to shut down. What do we do such information?

And yes, there have been catastrophes before (world wars, genocide, plagues), but we’re talking about the end of nature as we have known it since the dawn of man. The human brain, the human heart, the human spine, the human hand, all developed on a planet that now, for all intents and purposes, no longer exists. What do we do with that?

Denial is a very human response. Acceptance, and then becoming endlessly distracted by more trivial things, is also a tried and true response. Becoming depressed and withdrawing from the world (dosing yourself with antidepressants) is yet another response. These responses are all about escape. 




But there is no escape.



2. Abandon Hope All Ye Who Enter Here: An Affirmation?


“When we talk about hopelessness and death, we’re talking about facing facts. No escapism. Giving up hope is encouragement to stick with yourself, not to run away, to return to the bare bones, no matter what’s going on. If we totally experience hopelessness, giving up all hope of alternatives to the present moment, we can have a joyful relationship with our lives, an honest, direct relationship that no longer ignores the reality of impermanence and death.”

                                                                        Pema Chödrön
                                                                        When Things Fall Apart   


Listening to that interview, I wondered at how I had compartmentalized the enormity of the situation. I drove across town, back and forth each day, to a job I did not like. The drivers in the cars ahead of me, behind me, were, for the most part, doing the same thing. No one was particularly happy. Everyone I knew was mostly living hand-to-mouth. Why continue? What was the point? 

Faces in the hospital, especially those eating in the cafeteria – workers or friends and relatives of patients – began to haunt me. I began to hear Blake’s London in my head every day while eating lunch:


 London

By William Blake
 
I wander thro' each charter'd street,
Near where the charter'd Thames does flow. 
And mark in every face I meet
Marks of weakness, marks of woe.

In every cry of every Man,
In every Infants cry of fear,
In every voice: in every ban,
The mind-forg'd manacles I hear 

How the Chimney-sweepers cry
Every blackning Church appalls, 
And the hapless Soldiers sigh
Runs in blood down Palace walls 

But most thro' midnight streets I hear
How the youthful Harlots curse
Blasts the new-born Infants tear 
And blights with plagues the Marriage hearse. 



(It’s important to remember that in Blake’s time his use of the word chartered referred to chartered companies – what are now known as corporations. A good explanation of the poem can be found at the 21st Century Socialism site here)

So, I finally reached a point where everything had become impossible. How find a way out of that? I kept returning to that radio interviewer – his optimism, his hope – and how it seemed to be getting in the way of his ability to see the nature of the problem. What I eventually realized was that hope itself was getting in the way of seeing what was right there in front of us all.

So, to cut to the chase (finally!), it seemed to me that the only way out of this collapsing world was by abandoning all hope. We can’t leap over the terrible present by hoping for a just and green future. First, we have to look at what is. 

And what is?

We’re not living on the same planet we were fifty, one hundred, two hundred years ago. And, because we’ve spent so much time doing absolutely nothing about climate change, things are going to get quite a bit worse before they get better. We’re making too few changes far too late. (A great book on the subject of this new earth we’re living on is by Bill McKibben, called Eaarth: Making Life on a Tough New Planet)


NO! NO! 



Look away, look away! 



Oh Great Smiley Emoticon Save Us!





But, as I said before, there’s no escape. Not really. It is only by actually looking at what is that we can figure out what can be done. If we’re always trying to project ourselves out of this reality and into what can be – well, we’re lost.

And so, when I started to write the second novel, I landed on a strange, barren planet; one that looked remarkably like the one I was already on…



Detroit


Next: Among the Angels’ Hierarchies, Part III
                        (A Question for the Damned: “So...what’s your novel about?”)